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The pain and how it kills,
The cold and the chills,
The moon on the star lit sky,
A small toad hypnotized by it’s light.

All this crawling on it’s skin,
Is dreaming really a sin?
Longing for something more,
But then again, just a simple toad.

Time passed by,
And someone finally,
Graced a kiss up it’s lips,
Given by a gentle prince
All to smoother it in bliss,
All this from a kiss.

The toad looked down,
Noticed she was in a gown
And her lips showed a frown,
She gasped once and twice,
Amazed at her own sound,
Staring in awe at her reflection,
She wondered if a dream was the occasion,
She was beautiful beyond comparison,
Body that rivaled a mermaid’s
And red hair like autumn.


She then recognized,
She was never a toad,
People around her were just cold.
Leaving her lil’ old heart just sore.

What’s left of her,
I wouldn’t know
But how I wish for such,
I want to get a hold of her so
So I can ask if her heart’s still sore.
©2006-2009 ~ANheiru
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Author's Comments

umm...
It's for a friend,
she knows who it is.

From toad to vixen.
Vixen means a female fox,or
2. A fierce or spiteful woman.

Thesaurus: shrew, spitfire, harpy, hellcat, bitch (slang), fury.

...So..the tittle is really about the change described in the poem.

AND YES! i know i've been making shitty poems lately ><

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:iconddzgrl:
I like this ^^

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:iconanheiru:
I dont >< my story telling needs work.^^
oh and i never comment on ALL your poems since you post them in bunches >< you inspire me xD

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:iconsasukefankodachii:
Nice. I like the story told in the poem. it makes me stare at it. XD

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:iconanheiru:
o.O stare at what?

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:iconsasukefankodachii:
teh poem. XD

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:icondemonmoon-mistress:
it's not shitty at all, it's quite good actually :hug:

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o.o thnx

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:iconyorsh01:
it's normal to try to heal your heart up by writing poems... even if sometimes you seem to write them with blood, which proves my theory that all poems have life itself (even its birth was violent and sobbing) ...

and don't worry, even the smallest ones have their second chance...

Love

Your Bro

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^^ thnkiu.the poem was actually about a friend who helped me lots..tho i dont like the poem

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